I feel like Sunlight should be used on CD for the damage rather than just to maintain Sunny Day, not sure if this is an oversight or because one of the backline pets can change the weather. Other than that nice strat.
It works... kinda... If crits aren't working for you, you will die to greater apocalypse if the first backline / second pet up is a cockroach. maybe modify the second pet slot to be something tough against critter? I dont know. But I had to finish up with backline here